Listened to this on soundcloud before you put it here. Definitely a good song for it's message. I liked the chimes (From Nazi zombies maybe?). More good stuff, man.
-Monesmone
Listened to this on soundcloud before you put it here. Definitely a good song for it's message. I liked the chimes (From Nazi zombies maybe?). More good stuff, man.
-Monesmone
thanks! You got your mix tape yet?
Out of both of the raps this one had the best quality. I would say this track won, the other one didn't hit as hard.
-Monesmone
Fat Beats: 2
EJ Spark: 2
You had a crazy wobble bass here, and the drop at 3:18 gave me shivers. I gotta say I liked this one, very high quality with a perfect feel. Awesome song!
-Monesmone
Thanks!
I need to tell my friends I just got an intrusive exclusive from yay. Sick beat, good lines.
-Monesmone
lols
This was a frickin' sick track! Had to listen to it twice in a row because of it's greatness. You guys had some great rhymes and a some perfect beats to go with it. I'd Say this is one of my favorite raps on this site.
-Monesmone
You got some sick drums and electric guitar here! loved the distortion at 1:01, that was perfect. The song sounded professional and was nice to listen to.
-Monesmone
I must say, I loved your bass drop, instead of a roaring wobble bass I was greeted by a chorus followed by quick jabs of awesome fast paced electronic melody. Sounds really good so far, hope to hear the finished version!
-Monesmone
You got a nice melody, and some awesome synths to wash it down. The drums were nice. The main problem you have here is that the song is repetitive, especially your percussion. Easy fix: just add some similar melodies and transitions to help keep the song interesting. Also your ending was abrupt and could have been drawn out more or something of that nature. Did just fine anyways, too bad somebody gave you a zero for your work, it's worth something more.
-Monesmone
You know this is still my work. And I waiting on my mate. He is in France and he don't come back yet. So, i do fast song for chilling, not serious listening. I'm still learning. But I think, It's coming soon. ;) Stay tuned, and you will see ;)
I'm a young man who's had an interest in music since I was a toddler. I worked on my skills through practice with school and self studies with percussive instruments. I picked up FLS only 2 years ago and am still learning the ropes. For now, it's a hobby.
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