Well, You got some okay music here. It's rather repetitive to the point where I know whats coming next. The vocals didn't sound very fitting at the moment, but I suppose you are in fact adding them. Try and use some more melodies to spice up the dance feel, especially the piano. Based on the song I have the belief you were either confused or sad for the beginning of spring. The music was somewhat enjoyable, yet it became less interesting the more it progressed. I'm just judging the song itself not the artist, so i'll have to listen to your other stuff. Keep doing what you do.
-Monesmone
"Based on the song I have the belief"
Indeed... ^_^ That is the mystery behind every song
or book anime or game ever authored is it not? ^_^
Thanks a bunch for the read and review! =D
Keep in mind Monesmone the music I upload here
is already "test-proven" so-to-speak
[i.e. is already being performed publicly ^_^]
Thi8s track is what it is to each person! =D
Thanks a bunch for getting down to the sound
then spreading what you think around! =3
It's the reason I upload to Newgrounds! ^_^
(or anywhere for that matter =)
Stay YOU and stay amazing! =D
Love & Peace Through Art! ^_~*
Forever In Love With All That Which Exists
(That Which Is Seen & Unseen, Known & Unknown),
- Writer, Artist, Musician, DJ, Eternal Student & Being of Existence,
-WAM! TIGER M [ Modest Wednesay = ~~ \ ^_^ \ ~~ = ]
-5:40 PM (4/11/2012) [Eastern Standard Time, North-of-Equator]
P.S. Keep a looout for the Vocal Version of this! XD
The "DJ TIGER M" tag is simply to let audiences know
who it is in say an open field or club setting =)
People online can read "TIGER M - Spring Light 2012"
but that doesn't mean the crowd knows the instrumental
track's title =3 So I've begun to do that on my more recent
tracks because as a DJ I often get asked
[especially whenplaying music that isn't
"Lady GaGa" "Pitbull" or "Katy Perry"
(TIESTO REMIXED version! >=O)]
..."What song is THAT!?"
With my own... I like for people to know
so there are no questions since thus-far
I only post music online and only show my face publicly =3
(Right now ^_~*)
Peace my friend! =D
Keep the music coming and remain passionate! =D
Love & Peace Through Art! ^_~*
Forever In Love With All That Which Exists
(That Which Is Seen & Unseen, Known & Unknown),
- Writer, Artist, Musician, DJ, Eternal Student & Being of Existence,
-WAM! TIGER M [ Modest Wednesay = ~~ \ ^_^ \ ~~ = ]
-5:44 PM (4/11/2012) [Eastern Standard Time, North-of-Equator]
You got a nice wobble bass here. I'm wondering what plugin your using for it... The last wobble felt a little trippy at 3:04, but it didn't sound like it fit. The wobble at 1:40 didn't fit either. Some of your snares and basses didn't sound as good as they could and may need some mastering. For the most part I thought the song sounded pretty good, with a little work it can sound a lot better.
Sounds like a cool techno song, and no I wont use a brand of petroleum in my review. You did a good job splitting up some of the sounds from the starter pack, but what you should do is move away from that and find or make sounds and instruments. The ending was a little quick, but wasn't bad. Unfortunately this is not dubstep, as I said before it is a good techno song so you may want to change your genre. The actual song sounds rather trippy and is more of a percussive piece, but of course this is not at all bad. I guess if you added anything you could add a catchy upbeat melody. This was pretty cool. Have a nice day.
-Monesmone
Pretty good from what you've done so far. You had some pretty good syths through out which made it sound pretty good. A simple way to fix that choppy feel that others are getting would be to crescendo and instrument in from something like pianissimo to forte or mezzo-forte. I liked your bass and those drums - you did well with the transitions there. Continue practicing man, your gettin' good at it!
-Monesmone
Pretty good techno song you have here, i really like the beat you had. The piano was a nice touch, but didn't feel right. For some reason you ended the song so abruptly and made me long for an end. I thought you did well on this anyway. Have a good day!
But it's not a dub-step. You still are having trouble with your transitions, but a way to fix it could be to add a bass drop in between two melodies, but make sure the second melody is more intense than the first. You should add a constant drum loop that flows with the song and most importantly you need your wobble bass because it is the driving factor in a dub-step.
If you were not trying for a dub-step you may want to change the genre. I think this was pretty good anyways.
Have a great day!
-Monesmone
thanks for the support!
I think the pad that plays the melody is my favorite pad so far,
i find myself looking back to copy some of these instruments lol
Did a great job with the bass! I loved how it began, and was amazed at what it turned into. Unfortunately i don't know the name of the melody either but it definitely fit. Again, Great composition you have here and have a great day man!
-MM
Hey thanks! I'm glad you liked it even though I had to limp through it just to finish. I wish someone knew where this melody is from... haha. Thanks again. :D
But for some reason i can connect to it. Some of the instruments you used i can recognize, that must be it. I can say that you did a great job using FLS to make this beautiful composition. Keep making music man.
Hah yeah It's definitely a hybrid/variation of regular techno. Seems to have some extra vibe that draws listeners in. But I do plan on releasing newer tunes so be on the look out! + Thanks : ]
I'm a young man who's had an interest in music since I was a toddler. I worked on my skills through practice with school and self studies with percussive instruments. I picked up FLS only 2 years ago and am still learning the ropes. For now, it's a hobby.